英語六級作文鑒賞

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2017年英語六級作文范文鑒賞

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2017年英語六級作文范文鑒賞

　　tobacco production and consumption

　　we meet smokers almost everywhere , in the st reet , in shops , at the railway station , on the camp us and in many other public a reas . t his explains the astonis hing sta tistic figure of 1. 1 billion smokers out of 5. 6 billion people in the world , occupying about 20% of the world’s population .

　　the ha rmful effect that smoking has upon people mainly lies in two aspects : money los s and health deterioration . in the figure , we can see that the annual consumption of tobacco amounts to 200 billion dollars , which , if spent on public welfare , can benefit a great many poor people .

　　it is known to all that smoking does a lot of ha rm, not only to smokers themselves , but also to people a round who are actually unconscious victims . according to the statistics obtained , approxima tely 3 million people die of lung cance r and other fat al diseases every year .

　　for tunately , nowadays more and more people have become awa re of the harmful effect of smoking . tobacco consumption is decr easing . tobacco production is decreasing ( has dropped to 14 .2 billion pounds in 1995 as against 14 .364 billion pounds in 1994 ) . the numbe r of smokers is decreasing . finally , we believe in the advance of society , we believe in a new world without smoking , we believe in people .

　　結構分析：

　　· pictur e 2———吸煙者到處可見

　　煙民占世界人口⋯⋯

　　· pictur e 3———吸煙既費錢又損健康

　　每年煙草耗去⋯⋯

　　· pictur e 4———吸煙導致疾病的死亡

　　· pictur e 1———意識到吸煙危害導致煙草生產(chǎn)下降, 消耗

　　下降, 煙民人數(shù)下降

　　內容分析：

　　本文是一篇圖畫圖表作文, 要求說明并解釋每一張小圖, 最后指出煙草生產(chǎn)和消耗的趨勢。本文的寫作要用到多種文體。寫作前必須仔細看圖, 作出分析才能寫得層次分明, 覆蓋四幅小圖。本題曾是一道考研寫作題, 作者借題發(fā)揮, 撰文供學習。

　　萬能句型：

　　public a reas 公共場所